Name: Pharaoh's Builders
ISBN: 9780989633277

Heather Smith

Pharaoh's Builders

Briar's Reviews

The Pharoah's Builder was an interesting read to say the least.

I thought this book had a lot of potential - Pharaohs, magic, Egyptian lore - all of those can make a super interesting story! Think The Mummy vibes! Unfortunately, this book just didn't hit all the notes I wanted it too. And I don't think the second book ever came out? I've been looking for it but I just haven't been able to locate it.

My first big issue with this book was that 5 year old Milla (daughter to the Pharaoh) talks more intelligently than every adult I've ever met. She has class that no child I've ever met has (and I work with a LOT of kids). That tore me right out of the story. Sure, maybe it was a different time and kids acted like mini-adults, but it was just so hard to sink into this story when I pictured the many five year olds I've met.

The book itself ended on a cliffhanger, while I'd rather it have ended as a closed story that could have been continued. There were so many loose ends that had just been introduced only to be ditched. Bilal's love affair with Lilli didn't go further, the Pharaoh's wife's plans didn't go into fruition, and the magic introduced into the story was only briefly touched upon. It reminds me of movies that are ready to start a franchise but forget that they are telling a story within the movie itself.

I seriously loved Heather Perrywinkle Smith's writing and I wanted to see this story do well. I love Egyptian lore and the book sounded SO FREAKING COOL. I see so much potential with this story and with Heather's amazing writing, I can only imagine how great it'll get! Hopefully she writes the next book (or I'm able to find it!) and it continues this really interesting story. 

My low score is because of two reasons: Milla speaking in a more mature manner than the adults of the story and the loose ends. This book would be a four out of five if it was a little more realistic but I just couldn't get past those points.

Two out of five stars.

I received this book for free through Goodreads First Reads.