L.V. Lane

What happens when you snoop on the hot guy who comes into your diner every day? You find yourself as Wolf Prey Publishers note: Wolf Prey is a 4.5k word short story, 20 min read. It is intended for mature audiences, and contains explicit scenes, triggers, partial-shift situations, and elements of power exchange.

Wolf Prey

L. V. Lane

I am prey.This is not pity talking, this is an acknowledgment of a fact.I am small and weak; I am an Omega. I am a prize that men war over.For a year, I have hidden in the distant corner of the Empire.But I am running out of food, and I am running out of options.That I must leave soon is not a decision for today, though, but a decision for tomorrow.Only tomorrow's choices never come.For tonight brings strangers who remind me that I am prey.

A Fantasy Reverse Harem (Omegaverse)

Prey

Anita

DNF 50%
I hate not finishing books. I normally make my way through them. And I tried several times to get through this.
And I love L. V. Lanes The Controllers series.
But this I could not get through.
Where is the plot? 
Why are characters so flat?
World building?
Why does the writing feel so odd?

I had to go back and read a chapter from a Controllers book. The writing is similar but not the same. 
I honestly thought Prey was an early work of the author.. not one of the newest. It just reads wrong. 
I am not an native speaker so it is most likely a "me problem" .

I am tempted to give another star for the cover, it's pretty.